Unfocused Gaze

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Unfocused gaze, as bliss throbs rise Soul, in the void wading Poised presence beholds in surprise Magnetism cascading Awareness self-aware Sidestepping ego snare Breathes in love suffused air Feeble thoughts laze Unfocused gaze 22-November-2021 Quietus

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/22/2021 12:46:00 AM

True you wrote hundreds of quietus. Wonder where you find the time.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/21/2021 9:52:00 PM

You share your gift of poetry in so many different forms Unseeking Seeker, I'm amazed at the diversity of your talent. Thanks for sharing, A poet friend, Bill

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/21/2021 10:25:00 PM

Thank you, Bill! The Quietus form kind of came to me … must have written several hundred by now in this format … works well in these days of short attention spans!