Unseeking Seeker Poet Rhyme

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Unfocused Gaze

Unfocused gaze, as bliss throbs rise
Soul, in the void wading
Poised presence beholds in surprise 
Magnetism cascading

Awareness self-aware
Sidestepping ego snare
Breathes in love suffused air

Feeble thoughts laze
Unfocused gaze

22-November-2021
Quietus 

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Victor Buhagiar November 22, 2021 at 12:46 AM True you wrote hundreds of quietus. Wonder where you find the time.

Bill Baker November 21, 2021 at 9:52 PM You share your gift of poetry in so many different forms Unseeking Seeker, I'm amazed at the diversity of your talent. Thanks for sharing, A poet friend, Bill Unseeking Seeker November 21, 2021 at 10:25 PM Thank you, Bill! The Quietus form kind of came to me … must have written several hundred by now in this format … works well in these days of short attention spans!