Sara Kendrick Poet I do not know?

Unfinished Work With Him Complete

Unpaved road in deep woods
Those trees like soldiers stood
Draped in color as a golden gown
The fall leaves worn as her crown

Looking ahead the rooad narrows
Glancing back a great horizon

Hard to be traveling here
The darkness engulfs total surround
Only enough light for one step 
One step ahead is all can be seen
On Him now totally have to lean

As slowly travel ahead
A bright light turns my head
On both sides and behind
Noises of animals in wood
Stomach rumbles for dinner time
Inching closer the light overpowers 
From within a Being comes closer
"Come in my child and a dine for you made it ..It's dinner time"..

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Robert Marshall Bka - Slimm Williams January 16, 2011 at 7:34 AM Very awesome write here poet. Well thought out and place together beautifully. Write on

Robert A. Dufresne December 14, 2010 at 6:18 PM and a fine banquet feast it is, Sara !

James Peranteau December 13, 2010 at 4:04 PM A great write dear poet ! ty for grabing me out og thin air ! *smiles* I just loved it....ramble on girlie ! much love, james

James Peranteau December 13, 2010 at 7:49 AM This will be a beauty I'm sure of it...can't wait until it's done...send me mail when it's done, ok ? much love, james

Doris Culverhouse December 13, 2010 at 7:42 AM enjoyed

Andrea Dietrich December 13, 2010 at 6:56 AM This is a really good premise for a poem, Sara, comparing a dark path to reliance on God. When you say UNfinished work, do you mean its title or are you still not finished with this poem? That last stanza really lets us feel the need for faith. OH, I knew about maple! I remember reading about it in grade school. Never had it on biscuits but I can just imagine it on the butter! LUv, Andrea

Joe Maverick December 12, 2010 at 11:39 PM i sense much here that is said through the lines as well as that, which i read very good on him to totaly lean Sarah

John Loving Iii December 12, 2010 at 9:54 PM a little more work. john