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Unfinished songs Ruptured buildings and bones A broken piano A foot poking out the window A bomb killed this last song Broken hearts lying in rubble Rigor mortis sung in treble Silence sings for all who mourn Unfinished songs Symphonies for those with no ears

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Joseph May

Date: 8/26/2017 6:58:00 PM

A sad tale of unfinishes songs

Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 10:26:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:41:00 PM

Thanks Funom, you re so kind!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2017 7:37:00 PM

wow, Arthur. HEAVY stuff. I love it!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:32:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! :)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/1/2017 9:36:00 AM

Moving write Arthur, excellent pen.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:32:00 PM

Very kind of you , thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 6/25/2017 7:30:00 PM

deep dark and sad Arthur:-( hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:30:00 PM

Thanks Jan

Eve Roper

Date: 6/25/2017 7:25:00 PM

overwhelming thoughts of reality , it all needs to be extinguish ~*

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:30:00 PM

Thanks Eve, sorry for always replying so late! LOL

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/25/2017 12:10:00 PM

devastatingly beautiful, arthur... this rakes my heart!..huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:30:00 PM

Thanks Nette.

Darren White

Date: 6/25/2017 2:08:00 AM

I thought I commented on this, but I can't find it anywhere.... Symphonies for those with no ears indeed. And if you extend that metaphor, those with no ears never can hear the music and harmony we so desperately need. They destroy our song.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:29:00 PM

You might not be crazy, but I sure am!!!

Darren White
Date: 6/25/2017 2:09:00 AM

pfft and then my comment suddenly appears, so I'm not crazy after all LOL

Tim Smith

Date: 6/24/2017 8:52:00 AM

Very sad Arthur...a tragic time we live in.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:29:00 PM

Yes, thanks Tim!

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/24/2017 8:48:00 AM

This is a very powerful poem Arthur. So much said, to think about in this poem. Very well done! It also really reached me too, because I play piano. I do know what harsh critics are like as well.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:29:00 PM

Ah I love music! Thank you.

Darren White

Date: 6/24/2017 2:26:00 AM

"Symphonies for those with no ears" That line says it all. Very, very painful truth my friend... Great poem.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/26/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thanks Darren!