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An Ink Empress Contest: Letters Or Photographs 19Sept 24

Unfinished Letters

My taut pen scratched paper on
  paper--- speaking to you among 
  tangles of weeds, a wailing through
  love-filled notes kneading pain and longing;
Envelopes devoid of a zip code, of 
stamps,  rimmed by spider webs.
Tell me now , can I bear the weight
 pinned by unfinished  drafts 
       inhabiting our room?

Your wool jacket dangles tonight 
on a hook accumulating debris 
and stale mint,
while spring floods our garden 
with radiant foliage--
Papyrus of my ardorous thoughts
 lay on deserted tables, 
and I'm orphaned...alone by myself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Croft Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your words have made this a very sad story.
Empress Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Dear nette, this is such an achingly touching poem that made me feel so much especially the ending with “ and I'm orphaned...alone by myself.” that line made my soul ache! I really love the wordplay and flow of your words woven here too! Creative writing’ the opening especially is brilliant! “ Two quarter moons ago...you left hurriedly crashed by a wheeler, And my soul burned in the ragged kiln of night.“ hits home! Impeccable write! So evocative! Thank you for writing n Congratulations on 1st
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 4:28 PM
Gorgeous writing, indeed raw emotion... a fav <3 Wow!
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 12:22 PM
Your talent for free verse really shines in this one , dear
Gasun Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 6:45 AM
Oh, the dripping loneliness tugged my heart in this stellar write of yours my dearest poet friend Nette! A powerful and very creative write that carried me away. Another great winning piece this is. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Wolf Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 7:40 PM
Haunting lines, Nette. ~ Gershon
Parker Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 4:11 PM
Profoundly sad Nette, visions of heartache drip from your poem like the tears felt by the writer, whether real or imagined...good luck dear poet
Horn Avatar
September 19, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Where are you? Even though fully grown Live a life of my own.
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