Unfinished In Connemara

UNFINISHED  IN  CONNEMARA  


Small drizzle  -  or sea spray?
Wets the face - not enough to teardrop.


Above a cold damp brow,
Beads  edging down the black wool -
Not heavy enough to run, nor wet enough to drip.


Tiny Atlantic turbulence in my hatted ear :
Flurrying,  blustering  squalls. 
Buffets of  whetted   wind


Bring back Connemara
When she was there.
As in a seashell.


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Note.........Connemara is a bleak but beautiful remote part of Ireland  -  always rainy and windy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 15, 2015 at 2:21 PM
Nicely expressed, Sidney...represents Connemara perfectly. My best regards! :) john
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