Unfinished

My breath contains seeds of deep reflection
a reminder that time is a nuisance and memory a gamble 
More so in this late hour, 
When all I have left in the cupboards
is the darkness you gave

But I remember 
I asked for your fiction.
I wrote the lines,
inked the measure.
I begged for  this pain,
I opened the front door,
And let you in.

now my house is empty
empty house 
on an empty street
In an empty town, 
where winter has come, 

and I'm unable to warm 
the bottom of my feet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 6:26 AM
It can be felt ... the void and the restless time ... very good poetry ...
Vincent Marra Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Thank you for the kind words. Never sure if my words will resonate with anyone else.
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