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unfinished

i’m lost. wandering my mind, hollow now. secrets tucked in the seams, invisible to passer-bys. each step leaves an imprint behind, dust settling into the crevices left by my toes. the world empty, immune to stolen glances between souls and half-hearted exchanges. peace swept away, pushed to the side by an old broom of straw and wood. oxygen dissipates, I try hard, harder to breathe. but all that is left to soothe my lungs is the empty, grey air, void of the warmth of shared space . sometimes I sneak away to send a fluid rush to my veins, entrancing my mind in a fictional fantasy. alone, I bathe in my secrecy, cleansing my skin with vibrant truths.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/2/2013 11:20:00 PM
Morgan, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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Date: 10/28/2013 11:25:00 PM
a beautiful poem.
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Date: 10/23/2013 11:32:00 AM
morgan - Desperation and short-lived relief run through your poetry like a marathoner. I cannot possibly name all the driving lines you create. Your use of language is incredible. Welcome here. You are now on my favorites list. Kathy
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Date: 10/23/2013 3:26:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Morgan ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2013 12:42:00 AM
Mogan, epic and deep. the expressions are epic! your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/23/2013 12:09:00 AM
A very deep poem, such a good ending... Morgan, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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