Unfinished?

Adrenaline surging
Blond pumping
Emotions running amok.

Someone cries help
Sounds like a yelp
Will I get there in time?

Racing against fear
Hoping he is there
Will my love be enough?

To save him from drowning
In a sea of emotions
Let huimlive, let him live.

Beating the clock
Must never stop
An anchor in the storm

Will he take hold
Or stay in the cold
An answer yet unknown.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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