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Unfettered Love

Beneath the lasting hours of nightfall within our private dwelling;
naked feet waltz about the harmonized
silk petals eleven steps
onward to that of 
the flat-bottom 
vessel.
Unclothed,
laying
in the
clear
crystal foam
accompanied
by shadows
of flickering
scented 
flames
and two
wine glasses
teem with Champagne.
The temperature arouses
both temples, allowing entry for torrid love.
Precipitating...Evaporating indiscriminately...Sigh...Our hearts now set to rest.



Pace
INK-U-SCRIPT
Romantic
01-23-2014

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James Inman

Date: 7/28/2018 8:55:00 AM

Very sensual.

Richard Nnoli

Date: 11/8/2016 11:02:00 AM

Hmmm..., intresting, beautiful and creative i reaf here Richard

Tebogo Hlako

Date: 8/6/2016 4:44:00 AM

:) creative !!!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/6/2016 5:00:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit!!! :)

Angela Martin

Date: 9/28/2014 2:27:00 AM

SO BEAUTIFUL

Sarah Herring

Date: 6/13/2014 1:56:00 PM

Wow! Beautifully written.

Tina Yuzilaitis

Date: 6/10/2014 5:11:00 PM

It sounds like a love i wish to know romantic and sensual a terrific , beautifully flowing poem i love it :)

Donna Houser

Date: 6/10/2014 2:06:00 PM

I loved your writing. I found myself in that moment.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 6/10/2014 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by...I hope to read more of your work. A pleasure!

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 6/5/2014 7:41:00 AM

Romantic and beautiful...I enjoyed it. :) Ana

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/4/2014 6:45:00 PM

A love poem that stirs romantic thought and heavenly lusts!! Quite a feat!!! BBBRAVOOOO!!!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/27/2014 7:56:00 AM

Great write - well done!!

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/21/2014 2:41:00 AM

Hey girl, just dropped in to say hello. Hope you had a nice weekend. Too bad no one's reading your poems, but it will come .Love and hugs, my sweet. Mel :)

Mel Merrill

Date: 4/18/2014 3:01:00 AM

Lovely poem. I enjoy your writes. I would comment, but it doesn't appear you need my feedback--what a following. How did you manage to accrue such a plethora of fans? I ask, because I'm envious. Soup me your secret sometime, unless it's just genius, which wouldn't help lol. See ya around, I hope. Peace, Mel :)

Jiril Clemons

Date: 4/12/2014 5:05:00 PM

Wow, sensuality illustrated brilliantly through this piece, Ink. Great imagery with metaphoric wonder placed perfectly in this piece. Enjoyable indeed. Check out some of my new poems, when your free, bruh. Peace.

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/6/2014 5:11:00 PM

Wow, This Is Wild! I Like The Layout It's Cool! Seems To Fit As Compliment This Fascinating Verse, My Dear Poetic Friend... Somehow Abstract And Somewhat Incomplete She Seems ? Nevertheless, Excellent Painting Given These Very Facts; At Least, Unto This Novice Child....Thank You, For Stopping By And Have A wonderful Evening...Love, Jeremy