Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

Unfettered Love

Beneath the lasting hours of nightfall within our private dwelling;
naked feet waltz about the harmonized
silk petals eleven steps
onward to that of 
the flat-bottom 
vessel.
Unclothed,
laying
in the
clear
crystal foam
accompanied
by shadows
of flickering
scented 
flames
and two
wine glasses
teem with Champagne.
The temperature arouses
both temples, allowing entry for torrid love.
Precipitating...Evaporating indiscriminately...Sigh...Our hearts now set to rest.



Pace
INK-U-SCRIPT
Romantic
01-23-2014

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James Inman July 28, 2018 at 8:55 AM Very sensual.

Richard Nnoli November 8, 2016 at 11:02 AM Hmmm..., intresting, beautiful and creative i reaf here Richard

Tebogo Hlako August 6, 2016 at 4:44 AM :) creative !!! Pace Ink-U-Script August 6, 2016 at 5:00 AM Thank you for your kind visit!!! :)

Angela Martin September 28, 2014 at 2:27 AM SO BEAUTIFUL

Sarah Herring June 13, 2014 at 1:56 PM Wow! Beautifully written.

Tina Yuzilaitis June 10, 2014 at 5:11 PM It sounds like a love i wish to know romantic and sensual a terrific , beautifully flowing poem i love it :)

Donna Houser June 10, 2014 at 2:06 PM I loved your writing. I found myself in that moment. Pace Ink-U-Script June 10, 2014 at 2:10 PM Thanks for stopping by...I hope to read more of your work. A pleasure!

Ana Espinola Collins June 5, 2014 at 7:41 AM Romantic and beautiful...I enjoyed it. :) Ana

Robert Lindley June 4, 2014 at 6:45 PM A love poem that stirs romantic thought and heavenly lusts!! Quite a feat!!! BBBRAVOOOO!!!

Pandita Sietesantos May 27, 2014 at 7:56 AM Great write - well done!!

Mel Merrill April 21, 2014 at 2:41 AM Hey girl, just dropped in to say hello. Hope you had a nice weekend. Too bad no one's reading your poems, but it will come .Love and hugs, my sweet. Mel :)

Mel Merrill April 18, 2014 at 3:01 AM Lovely poem. I enjoy your writes. I would comment, but it doesn't appear you need my feedback--what a following. How did you manage to accrue such a plethora of fans? I ask, because I'm envious. Soup me your secret sometime, unless it's just genius, which wouldn't help lol. See ya around, I hope. Peace, Mel :)

Jiril Clemons April 12, 2014 at 5:05 PM Wow, sensuality illustrated brilliantly through this piece, Ink. Great imagery with metaphoric wonder placed perfectly in this piece. Enjoyable indeed. Check out some of my new poems, when your free, bruh. Peace.

Jeremy Street April 6, 2014 at 5:11 PM Wow, This Is Wild! I Like The Layout It's Cool! Seems To Fit As Compliment This Fascinating Verse, My Dear Poetic Friend... Somehow Abstract And Somewhat Incomplete She Seems ? Nevertheless, Excellent Painting Given These Very Facts; At Least, Unto This Novice Child....Thank You, For Stopping By And Have A wonderful Evening...Love, Jeremy

Sara Kendrick April 6, 2014 at 2:43 PM Passionate work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Keith O.J. Hunt March 28, 2014 at 7:08 PM Great write!!!

Tiaua M Ioane March 25, 2014 at 12:32 PM Talofa Pace, am getting attached to your work, love the subtleties, great promises veiled in every word.

Nette Onclaud March 12, 2014 at 3:43 PM whoo, you sizzle, dazzle, pace... the heat is on!.. wonderful touch of sensuality here!.. huggs

Skat A March 5, 2014 at 4:24 PM Ink, you need a new poem. Ha-ha, you're just like, me randomly posting. Have a nice one. WUV ~SKAT~

Michael Wegman February 26, 2014 at 11:51 AM Vivid. Colorful. Accurate. Elegant. Fun. Thanks Pace...good stuff!

Verlena S. Walker February 24, 2014 at 8:26 AM You are the romantic... Enjoyed Pace... Verlena

Sandy Ivy D February 21, 2014 at 4:26 PM a 7. Sandy ivy

David Williams February 21, 2014 at 12:25 PM Pace, I love this, it flows very well and the format makes it as well....David

Kira Price February 18, 2014 at 1:01 AM Interesting this one! lol made me think

David Williams February 9, 2014 at 11:42 AM Pace, a beautiful love poem, very good my friend...David

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