Unfastened

Tell me folks, have you ever imagined Saying to yourself, “what just happened?” Be still my heart Beating's off the chart This is it, my hooha's become unfastened
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Vinson Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 2:21 PM
Cursed be the zipper - it can fail, giving us shame, or it can succeed in causing immense pain.
Ellison Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 3:15 PM
Very poetic I must say!!! OUCH!!!
Flats Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 8:23 AM
You say your hooha got loose?//Careful, it just may induce//the "seeking thrillies"//(involving those fillies)//as usual, I'm being abstruse. HOOHA HUAN JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 8:37 AM
"Abstruse"... you got it Mr. John John!!! Hope your day is filled with abstruse stuff! Puts hair on your chest and a rash on your bum! HOOHA HUAN JOHN JOHN!!!
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