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Unfaithful Friends

You think there kool,but really there fools.they talk behind your back.i watch as everything go bad.im by myself and lost in this whole world,what did i do to get a unfaithful friend? I cry everyday knowing everythings not the same.I grow everyday my mind and my heart rate.i want somebody who i can trust and push my thought on.knowing im in pain.could someone lead the way so i can get away from this unfaithful friend?

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 3/27/2014 5:53:00 PM

Awesome write yet again...I see its been a long time since you've posted...please post more...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Richard Palmer

Date: 2/2/2013 2:42:00 PM

friend is a strong word,we misunderstand friendship for people we are acquainted with,there is a difference some people are just around for negativity,friends play a positive role,choose wisely Ebony

Lucas Ongawo

Date: 1/2/2013 11:34:00 AM

friends are few, and a few are loyal friends the few we have betray us too, its painful, i can feel your pain through your wonderful poem, Ebony, -Lucas-

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/15/2012 11:19:00 PM

Poignant write Ebony! It's never easy when someone we consider a friend breaks our trust but I guess it's better to find out than to live in ignorance. Well penned poem!