Unfaithful

big dark clouds hovered over my tiny house,
it paled to the storm within due to an unfaithful spouse.

relationshipcouplet

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Beryl Edmonds

October 8, 2021 at 7:39 AM

A moving couplet Alexis, written so well… Belle

Unseeking Seeker

October 7, 2021 at 9:45 PM

great couplet penned here, Alexis! Now, what do we do with the polyamorous spouse?

Connie Marcum Wong

October 7, 2021 at 8:39 PM

Oh this one is so creative Alexis. Double trouble within and without. Excellent metaphor. Blessings xxoo

Rico Leffanta

October 7, 2021 at 11:44 AM

aka The Louse? (The sooner you know, the better for you!)Aloha!

David Kavanagh

October 7, 2021 at 9:23 AM

Indeed Alexis, a wonderful expressive couplet, a home will implode if structure loses its integrity, even if the house is left standing, cheers David

Chris Green

October 7, 2021 at 7:04 AM

Sad but well crafted my friend

Tom Cunningham

October 7, 2021 at 6:28 AM

There is no worse storm Alexis, only you can make the sun shine again. Tom

Supraja Kannan

October 7, 2021 at 6:26 AM

Deep and poignant but beautifully penned,,Alexis ...

Vijay Pandit

October 7, 2021 at 4:14 AM

Powerful thought, Alexis--A storm within hurts much more.

Mystic Rose Rose

October 7, 2021 at 3:17 AM

Dear Alexis, no greater pain to endure then the pain of unfaithfulness. Once the trust has been breached it is hard to trust again. What a ink deep emotion penned here. Thank you for bearing your heart.