Unexpected
She never thought this would happen until a pure silver band topped off with a
beautiful diamond worth more then most earthly possessions because its so many
emotions, care, pain, and love stuffed into a costly piece of jewelry custom made and
fitted to be placed on her finger by the man who made the commitment to stay wit her
forever spiritually, physically, and in mind. Sadly this was a hour long experience wasted
with such a sour taste of liquor and a small pill that changed mostly her sight of mind to
make the body feel nothing but the awesome tingle between her legs and giving her
the addicting fiend to claw, nail, and scrape at his back till they passed out, awaking in
the morning with an annoying ringing to their skull and pound to their mind as she
couldn't quit shivering with the disturbing feeling of losing something she once
treasured now gone forever. -poetic
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