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Never judge something until you get to the real meaning of a poem As it just doesn't have to be predictable.

Unexpected

My feelings of love are in overload 

If my love was dynamite it would definitely explode 

The emotion of my love for you seems so very right

My heart beats out of control and my chest is getting tight 

I am feeling like I can't  fill my lungsI need to take a breath 

I have never felt like this before and it scares me half to death 

Just for you to be near me and to return the love I give

Knowing what we have gives me a reason to live

I love you so much and you know who you are

I bet you all thought I was talking to my wife  but actually it is my car ......
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November 22, 2025 at 7:50 PM
A good choice. Great cars are hard to find. I like my car too. Good poem.
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