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Unentered Twilight

Unentered Twilight Iridescent fog shaded lamp night Reflected memories within puddled streets Misted vision, no clarity unentered twilight Head down, collar up, pounding concrete Indigo rays invade the nighttime privacy Shoving darkness away to regain control Except for chirps, annoying birds, it's done silently Sunglasses down, eyes up, crawling into my hole bmdavey@06/26/16

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Date: 6/29/2016 11:41:00 PM
This one is most interesting in its imagery, Brian . Loved that image of sunglasses down, eyes up!!
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Brian Davey
Date: 6/30/2016 4:41:00 PM
I thought it pretty cool myself thank you Andrea
Date: 6/27/2016 9:53:00 AM
I love the twilight...very well expressed Mr Davey...great flow...^WW^
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Brian Davey
Date: 6/30/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thank you so much

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