Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

Unentered Twilight

Unentered Twilight



                    Iridescent fog shaded lamp night
                Reflected memories within puddled streets
            Misted vision, no clarity unentered twilight 
        Head down, collar up, pounding concrete

        Indigo rays invade the nighttime privacy
            Shoving darkness away to regain control
                Except for chirps, annoying birds, it's done silently
                     Sunglasses down, eyes up, crawling into my hole



                                       bmdavey@06/26/16

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Andrea Dietrich June 29, 2016 at 11:41 PM This one is most interesting in its imagery, Brian . Loved that image of sunglasses down, eyes up!! Brian Davey June 30, 2016 at 4:41 PM I thought it pretty cool myself thank you Andrea

Winged Warrior June 27, 2016 at 9:53 AM I love the twilight...very well expressed Mr Davey...great flow...^WW^ Brian Davey June 30, 2016 at 4:40 PM Thank you so much