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Unemployed Old Men

unemployed old men
waiting for winter to come
Santa jobs again

workhaiku

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Wilma Neels

Date: 7/13/2011 6:37:00 AM

A good thing Santa is so popular all over the world then hey Jack? :) lfde Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2011 3:23:00 PM

thankxxx Jack..for your special comments luv.. the Royals have been a big hit here in USA... they are charming all citizens ... shades of Diana luv..

James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2011 10:46:00 AM

A year is a long time to wait for a Santa Spot Jack. This one gave me a chuckle :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 7:56:00 AM

Wow! this is my brother.. every year during x-mass.. he gets a santa gig... xool,..p.d.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/11/2011 6:22:00 AM

very true to life. I feel sad for them and yet hopeful too. A contradiction of feelings. Well done Jack.

Judy Ball

Date: 7/10/2011 5:01:00 PM

Yes indeed. It's a cold job but at least it gives them a little money. It woulsn't be so Christmassy without them on the corner ringing their bells. God Bless, JB

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/10/2011 12:45:00 PM

Good piece Jack... Yet roll on summer...thats what i say all the best,& not detracting from your write its probably that which made me put it.! so you've had an effect..)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/10/2011 8:49:00 AM

That's a hoot, Jack. Still, I do feel sorry for anyone who's having trouble finding work. Funny haiku, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/10/2011 12:52:00 AM

poor old guys!! (and even those Santa jobs are probably hard to get nowadays. also the walmart greeters too)

James Foulk

Date: 7/9/2011 10:08:00 AM

so true, a great piece you penned here. thank you for commenting on Not in Vain.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2011 6:55:00 PM

Nice expression, jack

Johnny Sumler

Date: 7/8/2011 6:02:00 PM

Witty yet realistic! A very creative write and everyone can relate to how bad the economy is, though this poem tickled me with the last line. Nice one Jack!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2011 12:06:00 PM

haha..oh so true and some ladies might feel inclined to don the suit too Jack.. figures were staggering on tele today .. 25 million people out of work..oh..