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Undying Love-Tet

Oh, 
My love…
Where hath thy,
Gone? In deeper,
Sorrows where slings, arrows, and swords are drawn…

For I will love thy ways forever still,
In foolish dreams…
Love doth spill,
Beyond…
Streams.




April.24.2019
Tetractys This Poetry
Sponsored by: Charles Messina 


A Tetractys poem can be done a few different ways. It is a 5 line poem with the 1st line having one syllable, the 2nd line two syllables, the 3rd line three syllables, the 4th line four syllables and the 5th line 10 syllables (1,2,3,4, 10) You may also do this in reverse (10,4,3,2,1) or a double Tetractys (1,2,3,4,10, 10,4,3,2,1)...See Charles example  ("So Precious Is Love")


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Roper Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 4:00 PM
Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 2:20 PM
Congrats on your awesome win, WW.
May Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 11:28 AM
Very nicely done WW...Congrats on your win...
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:31 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 8:23 AM
Hi WW, It was so good to have the chance to hear your well written poem. Great write on topic of love. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Messina Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 7:04 AM
Great write my winged friend. I love the romantic feel to this poem. Congratulations on your 1st place win. "Love doth spill" ~Charlie
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 12:20 PM
Cute one. Enjoyed the Romeo, Juliet feel to this one. Thanks for dropping by. Your presence at my work is uplifting. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara
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