Undying Love

The whisper of your passionate voice
Was amplified by my ruptured heart

That

Into ecstasy of undying love was thrown
And now can’t, from you, live apart!


 
© Demetrios Trifiatis
15 SEPTEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 4:02 PM
True words of love. And blessed are they who posses such love.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 12:52 AM
Blessed you are , dear Brenda, for appreciating such love! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 3:35 PM
wonderful heartfelt romantic write Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 12:57 AM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment, dear Jan! I appreciate your visit!
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:06 AM
Lovely expression on love and romance, Demetrios
Trifiatis Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram, very kind of you to visit and comment!
Smith Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 8:31 AM
I know the feeling and long to have it again.
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 3:36 PM
You will find love again Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:17 AM
I do not think it could be difficult for you, Tim! Just wish it and....
Chircop Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 5:51 AM
So romantic these words and describing like a spell of falling in love - Amazing.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 6:02 AM
Precisely, ma belle, Charmaine! Merci! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a gracious manner!
Yaseen Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 5:13 AM
i just loved itt.... it moves the one who gets..
Trifiatis Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 5:16 AM
Welcome, dear Malik, I so much appreciate your visit and comment! Thank you!
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