Home » Poems » Demetrios Trifiatis » Undying Love

Undying Love

The whisper of your passionate voice Was amplified by my ruptured heart That Into ecstasy of undying love was thrown And now can’t, from you, live apart! © Demetrios Trifiatis 15 SEPTEMBER 2014

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/15/2014 4:02:00 PM

True words of love. And blessed are they who posses such love.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/16/2014 12:52:00 AM

Blessed you are , dear Brenda, for appreciating such love! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/15/2014 3:35:00 PM

wonderful heartfelt romantic write Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/16/2014 12:57:00 AM

Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment, dear Jan! I appreciate your visit!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/15/2014 10:06:00 AM

Lovely expression on love and romance, Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 10:16:00 AM

Thank you, Dr. Ram, very kind of you to visit and comment!

Tim Smith

Date: 9/15/2014 8:31:00 AM

I know the feeling and long to have it again.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 3:36:00 PM

You will find love again Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 10:17:00 AM

I do not think it could be difficult for you, Tim! Just wish it and....

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/15/2014 5:51:00 AM

So romantic these words and describing like a spell of falling in love - Amazing.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 6:02:00 AM

Precisely, ma belle, Charmaine! Merci! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a gracious manner!

Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/15/2014 5:13:00 AM

i just loved itt.... it moves the one who gets..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 5:16:00 AM

Welcome, dear Malik, I so much appreciate your visit and comment! Thank you!