Undying Love

The whisper of your passionate voice
Was amplified by my ruptured heart

That

Into ecstasy of undying love was thrown
And now can’t, from you, live apart!


 
© Demetrios Trifiatis
15 SEPTEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/15/2014 4:02:00 PM
True words of love. And blessed are they who posses such love.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/16/2014 12:52:00 AM
Blessed you are , dear Brenda, for appreciating such love! Thank you for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 9/15/2014 3:35:00 PM
wonderful heartfelt romantic write Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/16/2014 12:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment, dear Jan! I appreciate your visit!
Date: 9/15/2014 10:06:00 AM
Lovely expression on love and romance, Demetrios
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 10:16:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Ram, very kind of you to visit and comment!
Date: 9/15/2014 8:31:00 AM
I know the feeling and long to have it again.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2014 3:36:00 PM
You will find love again Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 10:17:00 AM
I do not think it could be difficult for you, Tim! Just wish it and....
Date: 9/15/2014 5:51:00 AM
So romantic these words and describing like a spell of falling in love - Amazing.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 6:02:00 AM
Precisely, ma belle, Charmaine! Merci! Thank you for visiting and commenting in such a gracious manner!
Date: 9/15/2014 5:13:00 AM
i just loved itt.... it moves the one who gets..
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/15/2014 5:16:00 AM
Welcome, dear Malik, I so much appreciate your visit and comment! Thank you!
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