Robin L. Gass Poet Couplet

Undying Love

Many days may pass me by
but my love for you will never die

Although your love may not be true
I'll always have true love for you

My sad heart has lost its will to live
for to you my love I cannot give

Many days may pass me by
but my love for you will never die





Note:  This is the first official poem I ever wrote.
I was 15 and it was at this time of year (1978).
I thought it would be fun to share it with you.  Over 
the years I have made a few grammatical changes
but it is essentially the same.  Love, Robin

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John Rhinem March 11, 2009 at 3:36 PM "My sad heart has lost its will to live, for to you my love I cannot give"~Smile~Wow~I can only imagine, how truly, beyond desribable You really are~and I say this with the most sincerest of hearts!!!!~It is very rare, from my experiences within this world, when one meets someone as "Beautiful As You Are Within!!!!" ~Smile~It is such a joy to know "You!!!!"~"My Love Forever To You, John!!!!":):) On we go....

John Rhinem March 11, 2009 at 3:28 PM "So Very Beautiful!!!!"~Even back then dear, "You" had this soft and gentle heart and soul inside of "You!!!"~You were born with such an amazing spirit "Beautiful Robin!!!!"~One which has transcended Your entire lifetime dear~Always so very clear to see!!!!....cont....

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 10, 2009 at 9:31 AM 1978 was the year I returned to the Navy Reserve after a nine year absence. My sons were 8 and 7. You were just beginning to establish yourself as a poet. They were good days. Vince

Carolyn Devonshire March 9, 2009 at 2:36 PM Robin, even as a teen you had a gift for words. Thanks for reading "Breaking." It's good to be back! Love to you, Carolyn

Raul Moreno March 9, 2009 at 2:11 PM The inception of a wonderful reign. This is a lovely poem that embarked your poetic journey, nice job...Raul

Sharon Winter March 9, 2009 at 4:59 AM Aww Robin, teenage love is so powerful. Such a beautiful, emotional first poem. Cherish it. Love, Shar

Laurie Ginn March 8, 2009 at 12:51 PM Nothing more earth shattering than teenage loves. Nice work kiddo

Cheryl Mccall March 8, 2009 at 12:01 PM you have a gift keep postig

Brian Strand March 8, 2009 at 8:56 AM Yes Robin,your gifting was glowing even then.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.The link below should be okay re archimboldo http://www.abcgallery.com/A/arcimboldo/arcimboldo.html

Christopher Higgins March 8, 2009 at 7:41 AM At fiftenn you already had the gift of words Robin..Well done.