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Undress

My love your eyes seamless from one end To the other borderless seek travel In out climb rush down trek the mountains the slopes skip slip trip test rest the grasses the vine fill my goblet. My love your eyes Drift the valleys the vales the sunrise the sunset the dusk the dawn void the darkness. My love your eyes play hide and seek The shadows My state of mind linger leave reveal revoke states of passion. My love your eyes the never ending mazes the tunnels the icicles break melt drown burn liquid fire. My love Your eyes fathomless deep dark unburden my treasure pleasure secure . My love Your eyes rest unrest My state of undress.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/18/2011 9:33:00 PM
Your eyes are beautiful. Thanks, my new friend for sharing the first one. God bless us all. bl
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Date: 12/18/2011 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Carol and John :) take care .
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Date: 12/18/2011 10:54:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Mary. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 12/18/2011 2:23:00 AM
Delightful. My eyes caress my love's undress.
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