Undone Soul

It's hard not to expect the worst from someone.
When others have made your soul come undone.
You seem to always see lies in the truth.
You want to give up cause you feel it's no use.
Somehow your mind stays stuck in the past.
Cynical if this will even last.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Michelle Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 8:46 PM
I totally agree, nice introspection julie, and love your name lol =Juli-Michelle=
Hill Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Thank you Michelle. That means alot.
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