Undone

Shivers down my spine Deep inside you Our bodies entwine I come undone I breath you inside The fumes of emotion Two hearts collide Loves song of devotion I taste your kiss You hold me tight Eternal bliss Lovers in the night Brandon Harvey 31-10-2014

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Jaafar Sadig El Waad

Date: 11/10/2014 10:47:00 AM

sensual and filled with romantic appealings.

Brandon Harvey
Date: 7/30/2016 5:44:00 AM

thank you

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/4/2014 8:22:00 AM

sensual twist of words.. :) Warm welcome to Poetrysoup.. :) I am Olive...and I had been here more than two years now.. :) I enjoy it here for I have some new friends and learned something about poetry.. :) I hope you will too. :D!

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/5/2014 12:48:00 AM

Thank You Olive and thanks for the warm welcome . hugs Brandon xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2014 5:58:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Brandon- I choose your first lovely and very well written poem - I like it !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brandon Harvey
Date: 11/5/2014 12:45:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise for the kind words and thank you warmly for the welcome . hugs Brandon xx