Undone

Shivers down my spine
Deep inside you
Our bodies entwine
I come undone

I breath you inside
The fumes of emotion
Two hearts collide
Loves song of devotion

I taste your kiss
You hold me tight
Eternal bliss
Lovers in the night

Brandon Harvey
31-10-2014

devotionemotionsfeelingshow idramatic verse

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Jaafar Sadig El Waad

November 10, 2014 at 10:47 AM

sensual and filled with romantic appealings.

Brandon Harvey

July 30, 2016 at 5:44 AM

thank you

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

November 4, 2014 at 8:22 AM

sensual twist of words.. :) Warm welcome to Poetrysoup.. :) I am Olive...and I had been here more than two years now.. :) I enjoy it here for I have some new friends and learned something about poetry.. :) I hope you will too. :D!

Brandon Harvey

November 5, 2014 at 12:48 AM

Thank You Olive and thanks for the warm welcome . hugs Brandon xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 2, 2014 at 5:58 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Brandon- I choose your first lovely and very well written poem - I like it !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brandon Harvey

November 5, 2014 at 12:45 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise for the kind words and thank you warmly for the welcome . hugs Brandon xx

Undone

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