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UNDONE

Facing God, Assessor so great my soul wrestles for earnest plight midst battle for achievement flight as I confess my undone* state. Despite grievous sorrow and pain my heart seeks the Lord Who makes whole fixing glitches of undone role toward wondrous thanksgiving gain. Upon Christ’s inviting altar I lay my undone goals with hope begging for help so I can cope since He’s my Rock of Gibraltar. Trusting the Almighty for grace against torture of being undone so that good success could be won I fix my faith to His truth’s brace. Now, anchored by the Saviour’s stand my spirit claims victory seal assured of His miracles' deal that I’ve done my best by His hand.
*Isaiah 6:5 Then said I, Woe is me! for I am undone; because I am a man of unclean lips, and I dwell in the midst of a people of unclean lips: for mine eyes have seen the King, the Lord of hosts. January 23, 2024 3rd place, "Pick-A-Title, Vol. 41" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 2/9/2024

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Date: 2/11/2024 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful religious piece, Beata. I find your writes uplifting and inspiring.
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Date: 2/7/2024 2:44:00 AM
wow, I love the poem... thanks for reinstating and strengthening my faith in God too!
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:04:00 AM
I love this thank you for sharing. Have a blessed week.
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Date: 1/30/2024 4:32:00 PM
your faith inspires me. The last verse encouraged and spoke to me.
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Date: 1/30/2024 6:45:00 AM
I applaud your unflinching faith, dear Beata, God bless
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