Undo Me Like,

Undo me like you would undo a a tightly bound hour 
with fingers on the handle moving forward ever near 
take me in your rapture, seduce but do not capture  
bring me to the forefront of what you hold most dear 
undo me like you would undo ...one precious hour
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Juman Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Its hard to stop once you get started. I had to hit my fingers and tell them oh no not you. Loverly write my friend
Godwin Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:56 PM
I am in love with this. That's it. That's everything. I love this poem. It hit me in every conceivable rush of a way to then pause my awe. Thank you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Rose  Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Wouldn't it be nice if people knew how to naturally unwind each other with love and caring. What a beautiful world this would be, Thank you for loving my poem. Cay
Raven Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 3:53 AM
Hi Pixie, a beautiful song sung so gently into the mind of the reader. Such visions your words do create. A wonderful poetic verse. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Man Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Pixie.. I love this. Incredibly emotive and suggestively stimulating!
Warrior Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 5:15 PM
One precious hour and one precious verse P.D...love & light...^WW^
Ashley Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:46 PM
Impassioned poetry that enraptures my imagination Pixie. Beautifully and deeply moving. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Horsman Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 10:38 AM
A love in time. Amazing poetry, so subtle and beautiful.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Lush poetry Pixie! Yummy :) xomo
Pandit Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Beautiful passion filled lines..take me in your rapture, seduce but do not capture... bring me to the forefront of what you hold most dear..excellent word arrangement..well written, Pixie.
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