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Undo Me Like,

Undo me like you would undo a a tightly bound hour with fingers on the handle moving forward ever near take me in your rapture, seduce but do not capture bring me to the forefront of what you hold most dear undo me like you would undo ...one precious hour

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Date: 7/8/2018 9:57:00 AM
Its hard to stop once you get started. I had to hit my fingers and tell them oh no not you. Loverly write my friend
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Date: 7/6/2018 11:56:00 PM
I am in love with this. That's it. That's everything. I love this poem. It hit me in every conceivable rush of a way to then pause my awe. Thank you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 7/8/2018 10:27:00 AM
Wouldn't it be nice if people knew how to naturally unwind each other with love and caring. What a beautiful world this would be, Thank you for loving my poem. Cay
Date: 7/5/2018 3:53:00 AM
Hi Pixie, a beautiful song sung so gently into the mind of the reader. Such visions your words do create. A wonderful poetic verse. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 7/4/2018 9:42:00 PM
Pixie.. I love this. Incredibly emotive and suggestively stimulating!
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Date: 7/4/2018 5:15:00 PM
One precious hour and one precious verse P.D...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:46:00 PM
Impassioned poetry that enraptures my imagination Pixie. Beautifully and deeply moving. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/4/2018 10:38:00 AM
A love in time. Amazing poetry, so subtle and beautiful.
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Date: 7/4/2018 8:27:00 AM
Lush poetry Pixie! Yummy :) xomo
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Date: 7/4/2018 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful passion filled lines..take me in your rapture, seduce but do not capture... bring me to the forefront of what you hold most dear..excellent word arrangement..well written, Pixie.
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