Undisputed Queen

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" DAY'S CORONATION " MY PHOTO, ©

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The twilight and the dawn

conspired against the night

for 

to crown the day their queen 

Cause thought it to be right! 









© Demetrios Trifiatis
      01 March 2019

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Judy Ball

Date: 3/3/2019 1:15:00 PM

As always Awesome Your words always match the flowers in exquisite beauty. Love it. God Bless, JB

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/2/2019 5:37:00 AM

Ah, the poem is poetic, and the photo is exquisite. Together they are a complete wow.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/2/2019 12:20:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness dearest, Caren!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/1/2019 9:45:00 AM

Never thought of it that way. You are so good at the big thoughts expressed in few words.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2019 4:05:00 PM

Thank you for your gracious comment dearest, Sunlite! Truth can be said in very few words if we understand it!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/1/2019 7:40:00 AM

Yes--the day wins..a sunny thought my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2019 8:30:00 AM

Thank you for your positive comment my friend, Vijay!

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/1/2019 3:38:00 AM

Unfaithful things... Moon not worried...The night will remain her glory...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2019 5:09:00 AM

I thought this was a poet's site, LOL! The moon's glory vanishes as soon as day's light appears!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/1/2019 2:16:00 AM

Without doubt the start of the new day in all its glory. Long live the queen. Tom.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2019 5:11:00 AM

Thank you dear Tom! Some seem to prefer darkness than light! The moon is romantic but life as we know it ,could not flourish because of romanticism!