Undetected

A COLD AND NUMBING WIND

BLEW ALONG MY SPINE

A HOARD OF IMPRESSIONS 

FLOODED MY MIND

THERE WAS NO MISTAKING 

THE SENSATION

I SAW CLEARLY IT WAS A THING

OF INDESCRIBABLE CREATION

SO……

I RESISTED DISCOVERY SUCCESSFULLY!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Higgins Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 6:13 AM
I love the description in this piece. Cold numbing wind blew along my spine..wonderful..love the form and the caps works for me.
Torres Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 3:02 AM
Nicely written Janice Blessings Michael
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