Undetectable to the naked eye

in his heart a gaping wound untended



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Knowlton Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Great senryu Line…"I am a rock, I am an island. And a rock feels no pain and an island never cries." Paul Simon.
Gauthier Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 12:34 PM
Thanks for that lovely quote, Charlie.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 5:19 PM
Sad and also a very interesting image.
Gauthier Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Andrea.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 6:54 AM
Such a sad image. Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Kim. Most appreciated.
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