Undesired Rain

Rain on rooftop gently pelts and slowly drips;
beneath the gust-battered brenches owls complain...  
cooing and lamenting not to make it stay,
unless it tapers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 29, 2012 at 8:34 PM
ANDREW.,,, NICE IMAGE..THANK YOU 4 SHARING, ALWAYS~PD
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February 29, 2012 at 2:26 AM
enjoyed the curved ball in the end, andrew... well-crafted.. congrats on your selene win! :) huggs!
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February 29, 2012 at 1:07 AM
This poem is a pleasure to read Andrew,thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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February 29, 2012 at 1:03 AM
Whoooo cares and why should I care?
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