Underwater

Fear trickled down her spine
as the razor blade appeared.
"Try it." they said,
"It'll make all the bad things disappear."
And so she obliged, without a moment to hesitate.
And this morning I found her:
eyes dead, lips blue.
The smell of regret lingering over her
like a mother watching her baby sleep.
And it was sad;
the way she went.
hating herself, hating the world.
that torturous blade.
Ending so many beautiful things
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kastner Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 9:17 PM
Thank you all! Your kind comments are greatly appreciated :) I look forward to reading your works as well!
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January 25, 2015 at 12:59 AM
Hi Cecilia, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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January 24, 2015 at 6:15 AM
Cecilia, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Pinet Avatar
January 22, 2015 at 8:31 AM
A sad poem that deals with the reality of life rationally and with blunt force, forgoing the dreams and promises of youth for the reality of life lost. The poem has a message and delivers it well. Emile #7
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January 22, 2015 at 5:00 AM
- Hey Cecilia nice to read your first poem :) - Welcome to P - Soup !! - Hope to read many more poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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