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Underwater

i don't let myself advance toward the entrance it's hazardous to contain so cautious i'm insane gasping for breath my descent is reflex to prevent the combat of convex flesh writhing growing while simultaneous sewing my mouth shut they refer to it delicately i'm in a rut proportionately passed spoken too fast to grasp underwater breath cause & effect much too low to say no

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/23/2010 11:08:00 PM
wow,, deep write, Enjoying this monday night reading, thank you for the read,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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