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written in unrhymed tercets visions of homegrown truth 

Undervalued Truth Begins

Forgiving is the true nature and value 
of the child lost learning ways 
in which direction expelling darkness 

From internal love finding a sinner within 
unveiling oneself offering the pain of the suffering 
heavenwards our wings are the shield of protection 

An instrument that wipes unclean dust away 
to make way for the light of truth 
slowly a cross will lift of the shoulders 

We are slaves burdened unto the pain of desires 
that where born from love on this earth alone 
Divinity is the real deal love that burns eternally grateful 

No longer blind to sinners or sin 
its there a heart finds peace and solice 
knowing from the crooked road walked 

In hell wisdom learns us many lessons in life 
we pray for those who are lost in direction 
always to the day we leave this world 

Destinies true love never dies 
He died for our sins Almighty who is all forgiving 
Lord I now take a leaf out of your book 

Burying the past in the hope He will forgive those 
who have sinned against us 
blindly fooled into believing a falsity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bateman Avatar
March 5, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Deeply and excellently rendered verses here. Each Tercet stanza is given power by your words. Enjoyed this one very much!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful n' outstanding spiritual love piece, that you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Very uplifting n' inspirational.I love it!Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.I truly enjoyed it!smiling.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing! Divine!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent piece!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot more each day that you're doing okay in everything, Liam.I wish you all the very best always!Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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