Understood Silence

When you try and speak there are things you cannot say
It is as if the strongest winds carry your words away

Yet still, your eyes captivate inside of mine
Even without words, I can read the unspoken sign

Your silent thoughts flow through my intellect inevitably
And your hushed phrases are still spoken quite eloquently

For days it seems, we've stood face to face
Breathing the same air, taking up the same space

But every time I reach out to touch that face, you try to disappear
Pulling back with every inch as you begin to hide in fear

These minutes have grown slower and at a drastic rate
It is starting to seem as if your mind is beginning to dissipate

It's harmless for you to converse with me, through grand and grave
Take those first steps and initiate with me, be brave

Just hold on to my hands and you will feel it, too
I will show you how to be colorful, instead of black and blue.


Written on September 3rd, 2016 and posted on September 4th, 2016.
By: Michelle Corbin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/13/2016 2:47:00 PM
Loved your write!
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/28/2016 11:40:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/5/2016 5:14:00 PM
Very nice Poem Michelle. I am glad I saw the blog about it and was able to stop by.
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/5/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thank you very much. I'm glad someone thought the blog was useful lol. Some people thought it was rather a waste of time, so for their sake, I deleted the post. Apparently, that wasn't really a blog lol (;
Date: 9/4/2016 6:04:00 PM
Very beautiful couplet! Welcome to Soup, I hope you will enjoy here and contribute to the community! :)
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/5/2016 6:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, I definitely will try to (:
Date: 9/4/2016 7:29:00 AM
I enjoyed your poem......Seren
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Michelle Corbin
Date: 9/5/2016 6:02:00 PM
I'm happy to hear! Thank you!
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