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Understepping Eight

I looked everywhere for a phone book I think there's little chance I'll find one My smart phone says to call 411 I think these books will now be extinct If you see one have a good look No reason now to print all those names I can't believe they have all vanished To find under stepped message refer to my Understepping one or two for directions. Inspired by Becca, I hope you like it. I can't resist a challenge*lol*

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Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/13/2013 8:55:00 AM

I had to look up the directions to understand this one, but it was well worth it. Wouldn't it be fun to put an understep in a poem and not tell anyone?

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 9:25:00 AM

Thanks for taking the time to understand my new form. I would be honoured if you gave it a try.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 1/13/2013 7:03:00 AM

This is really a great fun! It sure would be a very interesting form to keep students busy playing with words and learning languages without even noticing that they are making efforts! Thanks for sharing your experimenting with ideas and words! :) Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 9:23:00 AM

Hanitra, your back. I have missed you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2013 10:33:00 PM

hahaah, I love the hidden message in THIS One!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 1:14:00 AM

Thanks Andrea

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/12/2013 9:15:00 PM

I think only if you have a home phone line now will you receive one. I have a few leftovers I kept. Enjoyed the read..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2013 1:15:00 AM

They are great for propping things up! Thanks for commenting.