Understand Me

plz understand me!
i need some one to love.
but i was wondering
can you hold me now?
understand that i need you too hold me!!
i need you to love me
only like you can
understand the way im feeling the way i say
my words.
hang on to every thing
i say.
understand me.
hear where im coming from.
i understand how you've been hert
but i care for you
ill hold you up
with all mii strength
i just need you to understand
understand mii pain...
i understand yours.
i need you to be there
through thick and thin
i need you to hold me now
but i need you
to understand me first.
feel mii emotion
read mii mind
invade mii dreams
dmii deepest thoughts
and tell me that u can hold me
that you can understand
because im afraid
afraid to love again
but if you understand....
im calling to you
even though i dnt kno
if you can hear me.
i need you to understand me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/14/2010 11:12:00 PM
Good thoughts!
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Date: 8/22/2009 10:29:00 AM
Love the way you spell "mii" ... smile ... great write Hosea!!
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:21:00 AM
I missed reading so many extremely outstanding poems yesterday. I hope to get them read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Hosea. Love, Carol
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