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Underneath the red umbrella, my Johnny stole a kiss from me, so I felt like Cinderella, for like a handsome prince was he. Despite the cold, I melted when underneath the red umbrella, Johnny gazed into my eyes; then whispered softly, “You’re my bella.” Oh, the kiss from that sweet fellah! Although the rain kept falling down, underneath the red umbrella, deep love is what would make me drown. Romance cut short – though filled with bliss - just didn't fill a novella. Yet I cannot forget that kiss underneath the red umbrella. Nov. 7, 2018 for Eve Roper's Red Umbrella Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/17/2018 9:52:00 AM
Nice one Andrea ! Lucky Johnny is all I have to say. A very romantic poetic fling but is it really ended? Too bad ; the sparks were flying high !
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:34:00 PM
dropping back again with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2018 1:04:00 AM
Again I come to say congratulations on your wonderful win...
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Date: 11/20/2018 7:06:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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Date: 11/19/2018 6:00:00 PM
An adorable poem, Andrea, with an uplifting beat! Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/17/2018 12:31:00 PM
what a cute poem Andrea, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2018 10:02:00 AM
Such a great poem Andrea, a great take on the pic!! Congrats xxoo
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Date: 11/14/2018 12:58:00 PM
A beautiful win! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:23:00 AM
- A wonderful and sweet winning poem, Andrea :) ... Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2018 10:43:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Andrea, you had everything I was looking for great flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/10/2018 6:22:00 PM
I love the way you were able to fit in the Red Umbrella in every stanza Andrea! I have not been able to come up with anything yet. Too busy cleaning house. LOL. Best of luck in the contest! : )
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Date: 11/10/2018 8:39:00 AM
Don't have a clue why, but from the first word I read this in my head with a southern accent which was totally validated when you used, "fellah". This is a good time on a witty platter (I'm in a silly mood) Love ... CayCay
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Date: 11/9/2018 4:56:00 AM
Hi Andrea, a kiss never to be forgotten, a poetic gem that shines with dream's memory. You capture a moment of joy. Good lock in the contest with this wonderful little piece. Beautiful work Andrea. A fave. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/8/2018 5:41:00 PM
The word cute, comes to mind when reading this wonderful gem...
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Date: 11/8/2018 11:41:00 AM
Reminds me of a song by the Hollies. The election I over - did you get the chance to vote? I voted. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/8/2018 8:59:00 AM
So romantic, Andrea. How can you not forget that kiss...:) Best wishes for a win in the contest. Charlie
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Date: 11/8/2018 5:26:00 AM
Great work, Andrea:)
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Date: 11/8/2018 4:00:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Cinderella :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/7/2018 9:19:00 PM
This is perfect for the picture Andrea! :)... and you know I love a good rhyme!... I've been so busy lately, but I try to visit when I can...have a great day :)
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Date: 11/7/2018 8:19:00 PM
The Umbrellas of Cherbourg :)
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Date: 11/7/2018 6:39:00 PM
You used the refrain well Andrea.. Beautiful write..
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Date: 11/7/2018 5:46:00 PM
there have been a few kisses I truly remember none under an umbrella... good luck
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Date: 11/7/2018 5:09:00 PM
Quite an impression it made on you..a sweet poem of love-filled recall. Best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 11/7/2018 4:16:00 PM
i love the rhymes you've come up with and the lovely flow of this poem, andrea! well done indeed...
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Date: 11/7/2018 2:03:00 PM
I didn't realize there were that many umbrella rhymes... this is terrific! ;)
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