Underneath the Rain

Sometimes it rains in my small city.
When such days occur i am often left alone with the crashing waves.
Sometimes i reach into this endless ocean.

For a moment there are no cars or loud noises...

Everything seems so beautiful under the gloomy clouds.
Such days are often my best days.
People often say i am strange for doing this.

But i don't live for people or their judgement..

Even though such a way of life is nearly impossible.
I try anyway.
But i am not perfect and often fail myself.

So when it rains..
Like today i simply stand there.
Collecting my thoughts along with my fraglie pride.

And I smile.
I actually smile underneath the crashing waves.
Because no one can judge me here.

No one.

Robert Burton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/17/2013 6:37:00 PM
I so hear you, robert its nice to be in our thoughts, under the gloomy sky. We can meditate in a peaceful place....enjoyed your poem thanks4 sharing:)
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Robert Burton
Date: 6/30/2013 8:18:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time out of your day to read a little poem by me it truly means alot
Date: 6/10/2013 8:39:00 PM
A great poem, Robert, now one should be judge, no one is perfect.... i like the imagery of you reaching out to the endless oceans,, now that's a lot of water. and that is deep. Thank you for adding me on your favorite poet list. This is why I like the soup, every now and then I find poets who I will be devoted to, and you I will follow till you say no more...LOL... okay.... your newest fan~ SKAT
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Robert Burton
Date: 6/10/2013 8:43:00 PM
Oh wow you read another one of my poems wow thank you .. I mean to sent my other response to the first comment you sent heh but I suppose it all works out. Hm I very happy you understood my poem thank you and indeed we are those types of poets I feel the same about you heh.. Your new fan robert
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Robert Burton
Date: 6/10/2013 8:40:00 PM
Oh hey it's no problem you were kind enough to say hi to me so I must thank you. Hm and okay I shall it might be fun who knows :) and I'm glad to meet such a person happy to hear from me thanks I feel rather near now.
Date: 6/10/2013 8:35:00 PM
HI ROBERT, thank you xoxoxoox... I hope you like it here.. you should take a look at the contest you should try one or two out. Mingling with the contest is fun, even when one does not win. At least it will give you something to write on... i am really happy you responded back to my hello. SKAT
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