Underneath the Mimosas

Underneath the mimosas,
arched and pink,
leaning on Summer, 
I slow down
good thing
a truck
in my lane
arrival time
In heaven paced
because
I listen
when God speaks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 5:27 AM
Kim, you're very smart to be careful. No need to rush our departure, which will occur at the appointed hour. There is a lot of risk in this world and slowing down is not a bad thing at all.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Truly! Have a blessed day, dear poet!
Hind Avatar
June 3, 2024 at 4:29 PM
A fav for me- wow, like time freezing, <3
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Yes! Thank you!
Greenhough Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 1:06 PM
This is a special poem. God seems to be watching over you. Without faith, there is nothing.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 5:08 PM
So true! Thank you! I pray he is watching over you too!
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