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Underneath the glow

underneath the glow trees are painted white with snow a blue jay watches Heidi Sands 1/29/24 (C)opyright

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/1/2024 12:55:00 PM

Dear Heidi, This is so wonderfully visual and serene. Enjoyed it

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/1/2024 1:06:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you :)

Karen Jones

Date: 2/9/2024 6:49:00 PM

Beautiful and vivid!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2024 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Karen :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/9/2024 9:39:00 AM

There's great imagery in this haiku. Beautiful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/9/2024 11:16:00 AM

Thank you Victor :)

Deb M

Date: 2/9/2024 4:47:00 AM

How very sweet and lovely Heidi! Debx

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/9/2024 4:51:00 AM

Hi Deb. Thank you :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2024 12:33:00 AM

great imagery,,, I'm glad it is starting to warm up. Enjoyed reading.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/8/2024 5:26:00 AM

Thank you Eve I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have a great, warmer day :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/7/2024 1:45:00 PM

I love your Haiku write. A story in just 3 lines. Hooray!!! Have a fun day writing away....................

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/7/2024 5:13:00 PM

Hi Paula. Thank you! I hope you have a nice day writing too :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2024 9:57:00 AM

I like this one. Thank you for sharing it with us. I bet he has a quizzical look on his face. I appreciate the visit to my page with congratulations. Sara K

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/3/2024 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Sara. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 2/2/2024 4:31:00 AM

Heidi, your wintery haiku is a joy to read this morning! As always, your love of nature shines through! Happy Friday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/2/2024 4:49:00 AM

Thank you Mike. Happy Friday :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/1/2024 8:52:00 AM

You are so good at haikus. Hope you are better.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2024 11:09:00 AM

Thank you. I am much better. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/31/2024 7:30:00 PM

A fantastic haiku, my friend. The image of a blue jay highlighted by a white blanket of snow was stunning. Have a blessed day, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/1/2024 5:09:00 AM

Thank you very much Jerry :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2024 5:58:00 AM

Wonderfully descriptive. Images speak eloquently, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 6:07:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your input always :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/30/2024 1:57:00 AM

so lovely poem, i adore, thanks poet

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:45:00 AM

Thank you very much :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/29/2024 7:12:00 PM

Oh my, this is a sublime and serene haiku poem, dear Heidi.. I absolutely love the imagery that you've painted here within few words, "trees are painted white with snow" Beautifully depicted elements of nature and one can feel the glory of snow, trees, the blue jay and the essence of an enchanting wintry wonderland in your words.. Gorgeously knitted, I enjoyed reading this.. Sending you many best wishes and light :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:45:00 AM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you for your kind feedback. I am grateful :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/29/2024 6:55:00 PM

Intriguing Haiku that resonates with nature in winter. The blue Jay gives a burst of color.

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:44:00 AM

Thank you Hilda :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/29/2024 5:32:00 PM

a beautiful winter scene...perfect Haiku...wishing you a wonderful evening, Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Sara :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/29/2024 3:37:00 PM

Hello Heidi, A beautiful scene you painted with words. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/30/2024 8:10:00 AM

Hello Heidi, you are welcome. Hugs./Darlene/

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. Hugs :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/29/2024 1:58:00 PM

Very nicely depicted Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:43:00 AM

Thank you Joseph. Hugs :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/29/2024 12:39:00 PM

Love this Haiku dear Heidi. The title is captivating and I love the imagery that you have created with your skilled poetic words. I can picture the little jay watching. A delightful read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/30/2024 4:42:00 AM

Thank you Christina :)