Underneath the El

Underneath the El
traffic madly dashes on
pizza shops, barbers

hustle here and bustle there
adrenaline keeps flowing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chircop Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 5:18 PM
Your tanka are greatly penned.I imagine so would be your haiku.Welcome to PS.
Stiles Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 6:12 AM
Hello George, Great rhythm and imagery. I don't live far from our El and you snatched the feeling of it and put it on paper. There is nothing like the businesses there that provide happiness under the giant shadow.
Gauthier Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 7:41 PM
Good rhythm, George.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 10:30 PM
This tanka moved like a hustle and bustle would
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