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UNDERNEATH THE EL

Underneath the El traffic madly dashes on pizza shops, barbers hustle here and bustle there adrenaline keeps flowing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/25/2020 5:18:00 PM
Your tanka are greatly penned.I imagine so would be your haiku.Welcome to PS.
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Date: 12/17/2019 6:12:00 AM
Hello George, Great rhythm and imagery. I don't live far from our El and you snatched the feeling of it and put it on paper. There is nothing like the businesses there that provide happiness under the giant shadow.
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Date: 12/16/2019 7:41:00 PM
Good rhythm, George.
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Date: 12/5/2019 10:30:00 PM
This tanka moved like a hustle and bustle would
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