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Underneath a Moonlit Sky

Underneath a Moonlit Sky Underneath a moonlit sky Amid falling leaves Of salty foam fans Celestial sisters Point To a guiding star When a rudderless heart Navigates Straight for hard and rocky teeth Or too close to the black hole Of swirling currents Imploding The surface tension Asking handmaids – Sisters Of the sand And seashore – Calm waves And sea caves Wearing silk of soft Undulating Waves And red coral crowns – Ride on silver dolphins As guardians and guides Through the narrow needle’s eye For the hapless heart Past spinning fury, Laughing, Or dilemma’s devouring teeth, Drowning out the siren’s song Of deadly enchantments With sweet lyrical tides of beauty Leading Into the chalice of safe harbor – Choosing A compass of compassion’s grace To set a new course beneath Watchful, Heavenly eyes- With renewed love of life - Embraced By the beauty of nourishing nectar From the sea’s bountiful fountain Underneath a moonlit sky. 8-1-20 Title Chosen; Beneath a Moonlit Sky Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 8/5/2020 10:38:00 AM
Hi Sam, congratulations my friend, what a superb, well crafted poem, had to fave it, keep them coming and your ink well full! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/5/2020 6:49:00 AM
You painted a lovely scene in which the moon shines. Congratulations, Sam.
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:24:00 PM
what a beauty, Sam. Congrats on your win.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/4/2020 9:08:00 PM
So glad you liked it Andrea. Thank you for your constant encouragement and your congratulations! Sending you blessings.
Date: 8/4/2020 12:17:00 PM
Your poem is such a brilliant one. It has metaphors, gorgeous references and the subtle personification in those elements in such an enchanting way. Congratulations on your win Sam! :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/4/2020 9:06:00 PM
Once again I am totally humbled by your message! I loved the suggested titles and had such fun creating this poem. Thank you for your congratulations and your continued encouragement! hugs and blessings..
Date: 8/4/2020 12:08:00 PM
Congratulations on winning 1st place in my contest with this brilliant poem, Sam:-) You're truly a gifted poetess!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/4/2020 8:59:00 PM
Can you see me blushing? Edward thank you not only for your fist place placement but for your beautiful themes and constant encouragement! The suggested titles just seemed to go together as a foundation for this poem. Blessings to you my friend

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