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Underneath

vrs 1 ill never know its raining or get to see your face cause ive been left alone here taken to the deep and im still drowning underneath. wont throw me the line at least ill understand if you dont come again leave me to die ill find out all your reasons if not now, explain some other time. vrs 2 they say the view gets better as you get farther i beg to differ now im here forever gone cause i was too much to keep and im still drowning underneath

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Date: 12/9/2023 5:12:00 PM
The surface just the tip of the ice berg. Deep roots here. Nice work Andrea
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