Underneath

I know I'm the problem My fractured thoughts remind me constantly My love I've got the bullet But I never wanted the gun I think I fall in love everyday Strangers on the street I'll meet someday I think I love them all But I never intend to fall I know I'm not the problem His actions show me consistently I'm stuck in distain He handed me the gun After unloading the bullets at my feet

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/12/2025 9:37:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Tom Woody

Date: 1/9/2025 12:26:00 PM

Well, falling in love everyday with someone new sounds like something a psychologist might have some interest in discussing. Fosho

Joy Pond
Date: 1/9/2025 12:34:00 PM

Known as "emophilia"