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Underestimated

Underestimated 


Oh my love 
Deeper than seas,
You have underestimated,
My dreams so subtle
You have denied,
Crushed my desires,
Soul badly bruised,

Oh my love 
Clearer than sky,
You have underestimated,
My yearnings so pure
You have ignored,
Subdued my emotions,
Soul lies shattered,

Oh my love
Softer than breeze,
You have underestimated,
My heart beats for you
You can't hear,
Disavowed my feelings,
Soul traumatised,

Oh my love 
Soother than moon,
You have underestimated,
Always in my thoughts,
You can't be unaware,
Of the magnetic pull,
Soulful disguise !

Oh my love 
Offer me some sunshine,
May be of twilight,
If not sparkling bright,
Don't underestimate,
Let not the hope end,
To soulful incinerate !



Written on 14/6/14
Contest- Open free verse
Sponsor- Charlotte Puddifoot

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2014 9:02:00 AM

I have learned never to underestimate a woman. I enjoyed this passionate piece. Check second lines of third and forth stanzas they need editing. I'm sure with a few minor changes this poem will do very well in the contest. Good luck Dr. Upma.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 9:14:00 AM

Appreciate ur kind visit n intensive read Richard! Thnx for lovely comments ,, yes I'll do the editing for sure,, I just wrote as it occurred to me n didn't bother to recheck for grammar ,, sorry for that !

Kelly Deschler

Date: 7/16/2014 1:04:00 AM

This is a beautiful, romantic write, filled with longing and passion. An excellent poem, Dr. Upma! Good luck in Charlotte's contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 4:02:00 AM

Thnx for ur kind visit n lovely wishes Kelly!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/14/2014 1:24:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for her contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you taking time to read and comment on my work..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 4:05:00 AM

Thanks for ur visit n kind comments Sara! Always my pleasure to visit ur page!