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Underestimated

Underestimated Oh my love Deeper than seas, You have underestimated, My dreams so subtle You have denied, Crushed my desires, Soul badly bruised, Oh my love Clearer than sky, You have underestimated, My yearnings so pure You have ignored, Subdued my emotions, Soul lies shattered, Oh my love Softer than breeze, You have underestimated, My heart beats for you You can't hear, Disavowed my feelings, Soul traumatised, Oh my love Soother than moon, You have underestimated, Always in my thoughts, You can't be unaware, Of the magnetic pull, Soulful disguise ! Oh my love Offer me some sunshine, May be of twilight, If not sparkling bright, Don't underestimate, Let not the hope end, To soulful incinerate ! Written on 14/6/14 Contest- Open free verse Sponsor- Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 7/16/2014 9:02:00 AM
I have learned never to underestimate a woman. I enjoyed this passionate piece. Check second lines of third and forth stanzas they need editing. I'm sure with a few minor changes this poem will do very well in the contest. Good luck Dr. Upma.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 9:14:00 AM
Appreciate ur kind visit n intensive read Richard! Thnx for lovely comments ,, yes I'll do the editing for sure,, I just wrote as it occurred to me n didn't bother to recheck for grammar ,, sorry for that !
Date: 7/16/2014 1:04:00 AM
This is a beautiful, romantic write, filled with longing and passion. An excellent poem, Dr. Upma! Good luck in Charlotte's contest!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 4:02:00 AM
Thnx for ur kind visit n lovely wishes Kelly!
Date: 7/14/2014 1:24:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for her contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you taking time to read and comment on my work..Sara
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/16/2014 4:05:00 AM
Thanks for ur visit n kind comments Sara! Always my pleasure to visit ur page!

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