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Underestimated

Underestimated

A Poem by Debbie_Philly 
" I wrote this all the way back in 2009 when i was still getting my footing...  "
Underestimated 
 
The wind blows
My mind is frozen
Blocked, deadbolt
        Locked
Like a collection
In collapsed verbiage
Feeble attempts suppress
      Obstructed
A need for intellectual
Intercourse frenzied as
Life prescribes liberty
      Unobstructed
Saving grace for this
Impervious spirit labeled
Women interrupted by
       Deprivation
Soul searching questions
Merging unanswered by
Its own complacent fear
       Underestimated
No longer will there be
Restrictive whispers in
My ears scattered about
        Reassuring
A promise to leave doubt
Behind to plunge ahead
With ideas embraced strong
        Undiminished
 
By: Debbie Kelly
 
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       3/23/2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/3/2014 4:24:00 PM
Wow Debbie this is a real deep poem coming all the way from 2009, a blast from the Past! lol even in 2009 you still had this epic style that I like so much. A deep poem and I like the last part in the poem, "No longer will there be...undimished." what a way to end a poem! Great write! :) xoxo
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Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/3/2014 11:15:00 PM
Thank you Chris... allot of my pieces are old ones... and this was about writers block.. :) Thank you so much for your wonderful comments !!

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