Eileen Manassian Poet Senryu

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Under Your Wings

when under your wings
my heart was safe and secure  ~*~
why did they unfold? 

Eileen Manassian

Another one of my deleted poems....Reposting. :) I really like the picture that goes with this one.

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Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2015 at 9:08 PM I am glad you reposted it. I don't think I had seen it before, and I really like it!!

Kp Nunez August 19, 2015 at 9:31 AM "To everything there is a season..." I agree with Rick's comment but understand the sentiment behind the plaintive cry of a wounded child, Eileen. A touching, heartfelt write. Loved it! hugs! Eileen Manassian August 19, 2015 at 9:33 AM Hey, Sweetie. Thanks for passing by. I hope you are feeling better. There is a verse about the safety we fell under the Father's wings. In the end....that is the only real place to be safe. Sending hugs.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 19, 2015 at 5:06 AM To be embraced by the wings of love is the outmost sensation of safety. When they unfold they invite us to rise to the heaven of bliss! A marvelous poetic poem! A seven, dear Eileen!

Richard Lamoureux August 18, 2015 at 9:45 AM With wings folded around you, you are not able to fly! Lovely piece and picture Eileen. Eileen Manassian August 18, 2015 at 9:50 AM Yes, but sometimes it feels good to be nestled in warmth and safety, Richard. Thanks for the visit, dear.

Tim Smith August 18, 2015 at 8:38 AM I can really relate to this one Eileen. lovely Tim Eileen Manassian August 18, 2015 at 9:51 AM Thanks, Tim. I'm glad it has struck a responsive chord in you. :)

Wilma Neels August 18, 2015 at 7:14 AM Glad you reposted this Eileen, this is a gem. You say so much here and I agree with you, this picture goes well with it :) hugs Wilma Eileen Manassian August 18, 2015 at 7:16 AM Hey, dear....thanks for the visit to my work. Honestly I think the picture could stand on its own. I love finding pics to go with my work. :) Hugs

Casarah Nance August 18, 2015 at 7:05 AM I'm glad you reposted because this brings so many emotions and questions in this little write...and the picture is very neat :) Eileen Manassian August 18, 2015 at 7:07 AM Hey you!!! Lovely to get a visit from you. BTW...Love your avatar! Don't you look sweet. Hugs! :)