David William Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Under Your Spell

Under your spell 
Am I in heaven or hell?
I’ve bled too many times
The clock still chimes

Under your spell
You torture me…I’m falling in a well
I’ve said “I love you” too many times
The clock still chimes

My dreams are broken 
But, I feel good with you around
I’m sorry, I must flee and open
Up the gate to peace…you threw me to the ground

Under your spell
I’ve lost my mind…oh well
I’ve been lost for so long
Life’s like a song

Under your spell
You defeated me…with your spell
I’ve said “I hate you”, but I don’t mean it
I love you, friend – at least I admit it

 My dreams are broken 
But, I feel good with you around
I’m sorry, I must flee and open
Up the gate to elation…you pick me up from the ground
And you are forgiven

Under your spell
I can’t believe I’ve fallen in your trap
Can you hear me in the well?
I can’t believe you have threw me in here – cut the crap

Under your spell
I’m looking overhead for some sunlight 
Pour forth bliss upon me…get me out of this living hell
Hold on…don’t let go of me…good night
Good night…take flight tonight

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Duke Beaufort August 25, 2013 at 12:28 PM Sounds like time to move on to another--that is if this is about love that's incomplete. It's funny how the more we want something, the harder it is to find. It's such a strange part of life. It's just so difficult when the feelings are so intense. I remember dreaming about loves. It was a tough time. Very tough.