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Under Winter Skies

Under Winter Skies Aurora dance and, in folds of colour, glow Under the sparkling dome of Winter skies. Northern winds from the frozen Arctic blow And across the icy land cry and moan. Migrating birds from summer nests are flown When the bright Winter constellations rise. The old Season ebbs; New Year's hopes are sown Below darkened skies as slow passing hours flow. 01/11/16 Rhyme scheme A B A C C B C A For Contest by Laura Loo

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Date: 11/20/2016 1:16:00 AM
I am so glad to see that this is high on the winner's list. It really is beautiful Barry! Congratulations on your deserving win. 7 ; )
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/21/2016 7:06:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie. Barry
Date: 11/17/2016 12:00:00 AM
Hi Barry, congratulations on your placèment. Very imaginative write. I agree with you that winter should look like that.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/18/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thank you, Jannie. Barry.
Date: 11/15/2016 12:20:00 AM
Excellent Barry. No wonder it was a winner. Beautifully done with great imagery. Loved it. God bless, JB
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/15/2016 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Judy. Barry
Date: 11/9/2016 6:45:00 AM
Hi Barry, Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/9/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. Barry.
Date: 11/8/2016 1:49:00 PM
beautiful imagery Barry, thank you for being a part of my contest and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/9/2016 9:26:00 AM
Thank you for my place, Laura, enjoyed doing this one. Barry.
Date: 11/8/2016 11:08:00 AM
Nicely done Barry. Beautiful imagery and wonderful description. A winner for sure. God Bless and a seven from me. JB
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/9/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Judy and thank you for the 7. Barry.
Date: 11/8/2016 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful write Barry; sounds like Alaska to me! Best of luck in the contest!:)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/9/2016 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Cheryl. Our winters in the U.K. aren't quite so severe. It's how I imagine Winter to be. Barry.
Date: 11/2/2016 10:29:00 AM
It won't be long now, Barry. Beautiful poem!
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 11/2/2016 2:19:00 PM
I know, the weather is changing. Thanks for the comment, Daniel. Barry

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