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Under Weather

i’m under weather
tissues are my umbrella
socks, my galoshes

11/15/2021

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Paige Hind

August 20, 2024 at 4:53 PM

Hmmm....loved it <3

Kim Rodrigues

August 20, 2024 at 8:01 PM

A little different, eh? :)

Paulette Calasibetta

November 17, 2021 at 5:08 PM

Hi Kim, A great write ~ love the imagery, how clever! Blessings, Paulette

Kim Rodrigues

November 20, 2021 at 9:20 AM

Thank you, Paulette!

Kim Rodrigues

November 20, 2021 at 9:14 AM

Thank you, Paulette!

Maurice Rigoler

November 16, 2021 at 9:32 PM

These three lines say it all, Kim! Hope I'm not stricken this coming winter! Thanks for stopping by. Get better. / Maurice

Kim Rodrigues

November 17, 2021 at 1:26 PM

Thank you, Maurice! I rested and boosted my immune system. Feeling better.

Caren Krutsinger

November 16, 2021 at 11:10 AM

Oh no! Poor Kim! Get better!

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2021 at 6:07 PM

Feeling better. Can you believe my dad gave me motherly advice. So sweet :)

Janice Canerdy

November 16, 2021 at 8:54 AM

Kim, this is so creative! Janice

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2021 at 6:06 PM

Thank you, Janice!

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 16, 2021 at 4:51 AM

Moving... Blessings dear Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2021 at 5:39 AM

Oh how it warms my heart to see you on here this morning. You’ve been in my thoughts and prayers. Thank you, sweet friend!

Victor Buhagiar

November 15, 2021 at 11:25 PM

Stay home and warm. The usual remedy is chicken soup, I wish you well. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2021 at 5:39 AM

Thank you, Victor!

Gershon Wolf

November 15, 2021 at 8:04 PM

Obie Wan Kenobi, my stocking cap's a soakie. lol. Sharp senryu, Kim! Excelsior! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

November 16, 2021 at 5:40 AM

LOL! Watch out for those Jedi mind tricks ;)

David Kavanagh

November 15, 2021 at 3:34 PM

Very well thought out Kim, quite ingenious in fact, hope you get well soon if indeed you are poorly, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

November 15, 2021 at 4:02 PM

Just a bit…hopefully tomorrow I will be good to go.

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2021 at 2:02 PM

this is very very cool. A fave

Kim Rodrigues

November 15, 2021 at 3:02 PM

Thank you so much ~ hugs

Bill Baker

November 15, 2021 at 1:10 PM

Nice Senryu Kim. Good imagery. Been just like that many times. Bill Baker

Kim Rodrigues

November 15, 2021 at 3:02 PM

Thanks, Bill!

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