Under Water

Swim
Breath
Plunge
Under
Surface
New
Discoveries
Escape
But
Must 
Go 
Back
Above
For
Breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 15, 2019 at 11:41 AM
Lines of sweetness, thoughts of goodness, a complete piece, wonderful craft.
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