Robert Pettit Poet Rhyme

Under the Weather

I know you are trying to keep it together. 
For a little while, you've been under the weather. 
It is no fun spending every day in bed. 
Anybody would like to be up and about instead. 
In just a few days, what you take will clear your head. 
Don't worry. You'll live. You won't be dead.

Inspired by another member's poem.

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Anne-Lise Andresen September 28, 2012 at 12:44 PM Out of bed ..... it's a new day ..... use it my friend. Well written Robert. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer September 27, 2012 at 6:31 PM i like the short sentences at the end. well done!

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 6:23 PM VERY cute. makes me wonder whose poem you read to inspire this. (good one for a greeting card too)

Harry Horsman September 27, 2012 at 10:34 AM interesting how you wrote this, dealing with a very negitive, situation.. yet the poem brings the subject to life, and tells it how it is... like this alot Robert...

Lucilla Carrillo September 27, 2012 at 7:26 AM OK Robert - who is under the weather? Is it anyone that is a little sick. I know how it feels. I was in the hospital for 4 months and I didn't die. I'm here T. T. G. Have a great day. Lucilla